Tuesday 4 March 2014

How Farewell Trip got its title...

It's the 20th anniversary of the release of Four Weddings and a Funeral, apparently. Pause whilst you wonder where your life went. Stop weeping at the back. And I was reading that it very nearly wasn't called that at all. Allegedly, it was going to be called Toffs on Heat. Or Charles and Chums. Hard to imagine it being a success with either of those titles!


I was thinking of this because of a very nice review of our book by Becca's Books in which she writes “Firstly the title. Ambiguous and I LOVE it”. I was overjoyed to read that to be honest.


The title seems so right now, but it was one of the last things we wrote. The original title of the book was Wish You Were.  Not 'Wish You Were Here', though of course we expected people to add a silent “Here” at the end. Which we then mirrored with the last line of the book – PS, so that the last thing people read was supposed to be a silent, unwritten “I Love You”. (Of course, in reality, we not only changed the title, but the proof-readers missed out the PS at the end of the novel).


So the title was Wish You Were for 95% of the time we were writing the book. My guess is most people reading the book will imagine that the title came first, and that explains why Trip has such a silly nickname. But in reality we came up with the nickname first, at least a year earlier. It was only when we were improvising a dialogue scene on Facebook chat that I used the phrase “a farewell trip” and suddenly realised that was an obvious title.

It still took a time to take hold. I was worried about using such a corny pun. Karin had become attached to the original title. I liked the original. Wish You Were what? My wife had stated constantly that she hated the name Trip. A best friend likewise. Even Karin wasn't keen.

Now, to me anyway, just as with Four Weddings and a Funeral, it feels like the book has always been Farewell Trip, was always meant to be, and could never have been anything else. And Becca's review sits nicely with that.