I'm
in limbo and I'm not coping with it very well.
My
bits on the final draft of Farewell Trip are
done and Gary's are on the way. Even if he identifies a few more
tweaks, they're likely to be fiddling with what's already there,
rather than new additions. So I'm between projects.
We've
done some initial thinking about the new book – got the glimmer of
a plot and a couple of interesting characters. I'm especially
excited about the alcoholic solicitor who is friends with my main
character. She drinks scotch and I think she may have an eye patch.
Gary is hoping to get a car chase in somewhere. Since his character
drives a Smart car that will be fun.
However,
two engaging main characters do not a novel make. We ain't getting
nowhere without a story and, frankly, we're in a bit of a pickle with
this. We need a proper plot before any actual writing can be done.
We've learned from Ruth and Trip that it helps to be clear about
where the story is headed before we start generating words. Having
an end point to aim for is particularly important to save us drifting
in and out of different storylines, then having to go back to straighten
things out. Two of us writing gives double the potential for
inventive leaps in plotting, but the flip side of that is there's
twice the probability we'll end up in a story cul-de-sac. It'll be
the more complicated this time around since we won't have the
structure of letters, narrative and camera's-eye view that Farewell
Trip does.
So,
I am left cogitating and contemplating; coming up with bits of back
story, trying to fix my detective in my mind. Who is she? How does
she react to the world around her? What colour underwear does she
choose? (White, if you're interested. She also uses Blue Loo in her
toilet, likes sausages and breeds rats.)
This
is fun and makes for stimulating journeys to work and back. But it
doesn't take the place of writing, actually sitting down to bash
words onto the page. I have whole evenings to fill and plotlines,
character development and back story just don't cut it.
This
weekend I've been desperate enough to go back to an old story. It's
very much lowest common denominator romance, but I like the people in
it, so I'm tightening it up and will send it to some e-publishers
once it's done. It's filling the gap. Sort of.
Dare I say we need a proposal, and a synopsis...
ReplyDeleteIt's certainly a key difference between us. You love sitting down and writing for its own sake. I huff and puff, dither and doodle, and generally await the muse, who seldom visits.
huh, synopses and proposals aren't writing. they're business. nobody wants to sit down and write those for their own sake. but yes, you're right.
Deletethe other thing i thought is that once i've finished this edit, i'll do some short vignettes (if that's the right word) to get into eileen's voice. i have a feeling she'll take a little while to nail, so better to practice before starting on the real story.
By the way, I'm fairly sure the one-eyed solicitor drinks gin...
ReplyDeletehmmmm. i have been thinking of her as scots, thus the choice of alcohol. but a scotch-hating scot would be quite cool...
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